Fangala the Flying Feline

Hi! I thought this was very cute; it makes me miss my dog, who's at home in the USA while I'm in Mexico! But I do agree with Amelia to ...

Hm, interesting. I can say I've never read a poem quite like this before. Your first line is gripping, so good job with that. However, some of your verses were ...

I love the Twilight series, but I'm also a sucker for bad humor! So, quite simply, I ADORED this! Really funny, short, and random. I just finished Eclipse (so much ...

Wow, now that I look at your avatar, I feel all warm and fuzzy and shivery inside! I like Edward a lot more than Bella. Bella honestly gets on my ...

This is a novella I wrote a couple years ago, although I started planning it when I was ten. So yeah, it haunted me for a long time, until I ...

Thanks! She'll love to here this. I know; isn't it sad how many kids hate to write...or do anything productive for that matter? Then again, we can't ALL by members ...

My eight-year-old sister wanted me to post this for her, so here it is! She's incredible. :D I saw you walking away from my window … I was heartbroken. I ...

'Tis I! Okay, here's a few questions: Ranch or vinaigrette? Rubber ducks or sock monkeys? Fire or ice? Magic lamp or wishing well? Zoo or aquarium? Are bears your favorite ...

Wow. Interesting. Your concluding couplet was completely irrelevant and yet totally fitting at the same time, sort of jolting the reader out of the poem. Good, though. You don't need ...

Aw, sweet. Your tone suited the story perfectly--snowy and lilting and dreamy. I found myself irresistably pulled into this, so congratulations. On the side of criticism, I found your dialogue ...

You're going to put everyone in that writing class to shame. :D This was great; I agree with Suzanne that you have an amazing grasp of metaphors. However, you go ...

Wow. I am in absolute AWE at how much your writing has improved. You just keep getting better and better. There's pretty much nothing wrong with this. The only three ...

My only complaint is that you keep alternating between capital and lower-case i's. Other than that, I found that this flowed well and was enjoyable to read. While the imagery ...

Okay, to answer Ayra's questions: I really don't like chocolate bars. Call me crazy, but I prefer something more along the lines of cookies or pastries. Lemon cake rocks! My ...

THERE'S A FOURTH MAXIMUM RIDE?!!? *starts hyperventilating* Oh my God! Yay! Favorite movie: I would have to say Labyrinth. Who doesn't love demented puppets ruled by David Bowie? Favorite knick ...